This is a quality blog comment because I have started with a greeting and then I included the author’s name. I also complimented Dakbai on his water cycle explanation. I made a connection and shared about our writing too and how much we enjoyed it too. I ask a question about his water cycle. I have proofread my comment and I fixed up all the mistakes and fixed up the spelling. I used more words than exclamation marks.
Kia ora Thanush, This is a good start, I can see you have been trying to make connections to our blog commenting criteria, well done.
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